View Full Version : Part 1.2 of my Tomb Raider movie script

21-07-07, 21:48
As I´ve posted before, I´ve been writing on a TR movie script, and as I´m going on holiday tomorrow, I thought I´d just post what I had finished writing so far, and see what comments and criticism is waiting for me when I get back. So here it is, version 1.2 of my script:


Jin Uzuki
22-07-07, 01:04
Wow Cardinal. It's obvious you put a lot of work into this. It's 62 pages on my MS Word 2007. 'Twill take some time to read through all of them. Anyhow, I'm looking forward to Lara's philosophical, sarcastic banters with the other characters (if any). Also, I'm quite impressed with the level of detail and thought you put into the visual variations of the script. Maybe you should pursue a career in film-making and such. ;)

22-07-07, 08:04
Wow, very impressive. I haven't read it all just yet, but I'll surely be reading all through it. I have the impression that I would enjoy viewing this film if it would ever be made. :)
I'll post more when i read the entire script. :D

22-07-07, 08:34
omg. This is so detailed:tmb: great job, read the first few pages, but I'll have to take my time with it(have some writing of my own to do:D)

25-07-07, 12:10
If you haven´t read the script yet, I suggest reading this draft instead, there´s a scene I wanted to include, but didn´t have a finished idea of how to write it, but that idea came to me two days ago, so I downloaded the draft and added the scene (as well as doing some further polishing and correcting some mistakes I overlooked), if you´ve already read through it, then you can just fast forward to scene 73 and read from there. Here´s the updated version: http://www.mediafire.com/?bi3b3eynalg

25-07-07, 13:58
awesomeness, pure greatness :D