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God Horus
27-07-07, 21:03
Alright. I am working on a brand new story, ever since the hit of my last one. This one is basically, Resident Evil 4, and Separate Ways, only things have been changed around. I am basically taking bits of the story of Separate Ways and Resident Evil 4, and merging them together, and making the character Lara. Also, it features a famous Resident Evil character, Wesker, who now becomes "Jesse"

Plot:

Lara is invited by a mysterious character called "Jesse" to help him. When Lara refuses, and demands to know why she would do something for a man she does not even know, he tells her about Natla, and how Lara took that opportunity. Jesse then begins to tell Lara that she would never be able to do it anyway, and he doesn't know what he was even thinking asking her. Lara, decides to prove to him she can do it, and goes on a mission to obtain one parasitic sample. Her journey takes her somewhere in Spain, where she is forced to kill hundreds of villagers known as "Ganado" who are possessed by this parasite. Her journey lands her into getting knocked out, and getting a parasite shot into her neck. She must then travel to a mysterious island which has a lab performing some research on an antidote for the parasite. When the parasite is finally removed, she is forced to kill more Ganado and finally kill Jesse and destroy the sample. After this, she has to plant a bomb in the village and island, destroying the locations, and Ganado.

So, do you guys think it will work or no...??? :+)

ashnar
28-07-07, 07:27
Yeah, I think it would work. It would be nice if you could also show Lara despair a few times cause of the parasyte. this is afterall, not her turf.(If you don't mind me saying this, the whole villagers stuff reminded me of the mutates in Louisiana in Bloodrayne, the first game :D). Anyway, sounds gruesome and scary, and I like that. Write it. What do you have to loose?

kryptonite23
28-07-07, 07:29
It could work somehow.By the way it is a great one.:)

God Horus
28-07-07, 14:44
Alright. I have decided to write it. I might actually just change the Jesse character to Wesker anyways. It will be a "different version of him"