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GlAssBOx
30-07-08, 23:31
Okay, so Paperdoll's pixie sketch gave me some inspiration to start drawing my suckish drawing.


http://i36.************/2h3bdyd.jpg

so far so good :)

Shrantellatessa
30-07-08, 23:38
Nice head and shoulders, but the neck look like a pyramid (wide in the bottom and narrow in the top), needs to be straight all the way up :) Good luck :tmb:

GlAssBOx
30-07-08, 23:48
Did what you said, I'm quite pleased with her eyes and mouth, but I think i should lower the nose.

http://i37.************/2rgfll2.jpg

Shrantellatessa
31-07-08, 00:13
I agree that you need to lower her nose a bit, but I don't see how you fixed the neck, it still looks the same to me :)

GlAssBOx
31-07-08, 00:31
I narrowed the top a bit, I don't want her to have a stick for a neck :)

bloodstormaoa
31-07-08, 00:59
I narrowed the top a bit, I don't want her to have a stick for a neck :)

It needs to curve up from the shoulders as opposed to the straight lines currently in use.

Paperdoll
31-07-08, 00:59
The neck actually looks worse. Look at yourself in the mirror or google a few pictures for reference. You have a cartoonish style but you should still stick to correct anatomy.

Kudos for creativity on the title and thanks XD glad I inspired you :)

Also for the eye remember that it has an anatomy of it's own. Eyelids, tear ducts etc are all important parts of an eye. Even in a cartoonish style, you can implement them in some way to give your drawing more character.

GlAssBOx
31-07-08, 01:16
Thanks for the help, I'm remaking the neck right now, but it doesn't seem to give me enough room, but I have an idea on how to fix that ;)

I've also decided to color the image in black in white, but add red to the eyes, as in rage, sadness.
:hug:

Shrantellatessa
31-07-08, 01:17
I narrowed the top a bit, I don't want her to have a stick for a neck :)

I didn't mean that she needs to have a stick-neck :p Just follow Paperdoll's advice and you'll be fine :) Can't wait to see it finished and colored ;)

GlAssBOx
31-07-08, 01:23
it's giving me troubles, but you know when women wore those necklaces stacked on top of each other, and it made their necks longer?

Shrantellatessa
31-07-08, 01:30
it's giving me troubles, but you know when women wore those necklaces stacked on top of each other, and it made their necks longer?

Ah! yes, I get what you mean now. The women who wear that are called the "Kayan or Padaung women" (use these words in Google images to get reference photos), which is a tribe in Thailand :)

http://www.denniscox.com/MYPadaungWomen.jpg

GlAssBOx
31-07-08, 01:34
I could incorporate it into my drawing....

kryptonite23
31-07-08, 03:18
The one with the eyes, mouth and nose looks great!! :D

GlAssBOx
31-07-08, 04:49
If those coils are taken off, they can die ;)

http://i37.************/4kxtom.jpg

KurtisLonely
31-07-08, 08:41
looking good so far :)

GlAssBOx
31-07-08, 20:31
:)

http://i34.************/2d0cas0.jpg

EmeraldFields
02-08-08, 02:35
That's awesome:tmb:

Quasimodo
03-08-08, 12:26
Great job on the hair! I like how you aren't afraid to use a lot of colour :D

Autolycus
03-08-08, 19:36
Looks really good :tmb: