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FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 16:16
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Trust of a Mage

A novelization of the DA2 storyline, along with Hawke's romance with Anders.
Also it has spoilers for Anders and Hawkes romance to. So... :p

Note: Plotline spoilers will be within this fanfic, don't start shouting at me if I spoil something. I ain't whiting out anything either.

Chapter 1 (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/1) ~ Maps

Chapter 2 (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/2) ~ Karl

Chapter 3 (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/3) ~ Grieving

Chapter 4 (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/4) ~ The Deep Roads

Chapter 5 (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/5) ~ Bump in the Night

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 16:17
Teaser:

He saw a streak of ice fly over his head and smash into one of the dwarfs.
‘Someone?’ Hawke thought, trying to turn his head around.
A moment later he felt the dagger sink into his abdomen…

Please comment. :)

TRDaz
25-06-11, 16:46
Teaser:



Please comment. :)

Amazing teaser!! I haven't really played DA 2 because when I try it crashes so I don't care about spoilers, I won't be able to play the game anyways. Can't wait until you continue with this:D

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 17:07
Aw thank you. :hug:

xXhayleyroxXx
25-06-11, 18:42
Ooooo this is good m'dear! I like how he mentions his kitty he used to have and how you very subtely make things kinky between then (:vlol:)
I also very much liked the description of Anders :whi:

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 18:43
All happens in the game.
Doesn't really. :p

Kinky? Howz? xD

xXhayleyroxXx
25-06-11, 18:46
All happens in the game.
Doesn't really. :p

Kinky? Howz? xD

You've just broken my heart - GET OUT :mad:

Oh wait, it's your thread... umm

Yeah kinky coz he goes and rests his head on him and shizz and anders puts his arms round his waist xD

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 18:47
At least two people like it. ;D

EDIT***

The thing with the cat happens. xD
I just write around the plot of DA2. :p

xXhayleyroxXx
25-06-11, 18:49
At least two people like it. ;D

EDIT***

The thing with the cat happens. xD
I just write around the plot of DA2. :p

Oh do you now
WELL CHA

And I do, very muchly <3

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 18:52
Hopefully I'll get it done. >_>
*grumbles*

xXhayleyroxXx
25-06-11, 18:53
Hopefully I'll get it done. >_>
*grumbles*

You better, You always start things and never finish. Just like in bed >:I

LMAO, I'm such a nice friend :') xxxxxxx

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 18:55
True that. <3 Shout at me on MSN if I haven't updated a chapter during the week. :)

I'll start on the second chapter tonight. xD

xXhayleyroxXx
25-06-11, 18:55
True that. <3 Shout at me on MSN if I haven't updated a chapter during the week. :)

I'll start on the second chapter tonight. xD

I'll do more than shout at you, I'll frikkin nom your face in the nasty way :mad:

And you better <3

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 18:57
I will, now GET OFF MY THREAD WHORE.

:p

xXhayleyroxXx
25-06-11, 18:58
Nah, I'm gonna live here. I'm just gonna snuggle up in this blanket right here and...
K FINE! I know when I'm not wanted :'(

... manwhore :whi:

FloTheMachine
25-06-11, 19:00
NO! Do stay, I'll make some crumpets and tea whilst we write this together. :hug:

FloTheMachine
26-06-11, 11:34
Chapter 2 ~ Karl (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/2)

Teaser:

“Are you ready?” Anders questioned, drawing his staff. Hawke hastened to do the same. Hawke gently pushed open the door, and slipped into the musty air of the Chantry, the door swung shut with a gentle ‘whoosh.’

TRDaz
26-06-11, 11:52
OMG! AWESOMENESS ALERT!! :p Love this chapter :D

FloTheMachine
26-06-11, 11:58
D'aww. <3

xXhayleyroxXx
26-06-11, 15:27
'tortured sexy mage persona' :vlol:

I wanted them to kiss when he puts his hand on his shoulder, but they didn't ;_;

But cha, I love it -- obviously <3 xxxxx

FloTheMachine
26-06-11, 19:08
Genuine game quote. :vlol:

xXhayleyroxXx
26-06-11, 19:09
Genuine game quote. :vlol:

I need this game!

FloTheMachine
05-07-11, 17:02
Sorry for the long delay, Booksie was an awful bitch. :smk:

Chapter 3 (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/3)

Grieving

Bartrend was giving the hirelings a pep talk, about where and how they were going to enter the Deep Roads. Aveline was leaning against the far wall with Hawke, whilst Varric and Anders were still merged with the crowd.

TRDaz
05-07-11, 20:23
Another amazing chapter, FloTheMachine!! :)

FloTheMachine
11-07-11, 21:09
Chapter 4 ~ The Deep Roads (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/4)

Enjoy this one, sorry for the long wait. :p

miss.haggard
11-07-11, 21:12
Oh yay! I shall be reading this soon!

FloTheMachine
11-07-11, 21:13
D:
Thanks. :p

xXhayleyroxXx
12-07-11, 15:09
I got half way through Chapter 3 and I got distracted by the crooked smile thing and then you started sending me kinky videos ;D I'll read it later when I stop laughing xD xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

FloTheMachine
12-07-11, 21:58
The next chapter is going to be when Hawke starts to realise his... how do you say...

Feelings? For Anders. :p
And theres a really mushy awkward scene. :vlol:

xXhayleyroxXx
12-07-11, 22:23
Sounds good :mis: Awkward mushy scenes are the best xD

K so like, I'm randomly typing thoughts and stuff when I'm reading :vlol:

Hawke wants a husky <3 :jmp: And that's so right about the interior/exterior thanggg with his serious face (>:I) :D

And the mouse friend <3 And I like the cliffhanger :mis:
More plz <3
By the way, I really love the word hirelings <3 Its adoreable xxx

Atlantisfreak
12-07-11, 22:38
I'm sorry but i totes misread the title.

i thought it said...

...thursts of a mage...

...

:vlol:

FloTheMachine
13-07-11, 19:36
Sounds good :mis: Awkward mushy scenes are the best xD

K so like, I'm randomly typing thoughts and stuff when I'm reading :vlol:

Hawke wants a husky <3 :jmp: And that's so right about the interior/exterior thanggg with his serious face (>:I) :D

And the mouse friend <3 And I like the cliffhanger :mis:
More plz <3
By the way, I really love the word hirelings <3 Its adoreable xxx

Yeahh. xD I hate the Mulbari dogs, they look nasty, so hell, why not put in a husky. :vlol:

And mouse friends. <3
More to come soon bb. XD

^
:vlol:!

xXhayleyroxXx
13-07-11, 19:40
Yeahh. xD I hate the Mulbari dogs, they look nasty, so hell, why not put in a husky. :vlol:

And mouse friends. <3
More to come soon bb. XD

^
:vlol:!

You look nasty :gki: I iz joking btw ;D
And yayy, I want a mouse friend <3
And yayyy ^.^ xxxxxxxxxx

FloTheMachine
14-07-11, 21:29
Chapter Five ~ Bump in the Night (http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/flothemachine/trust-of-a-mage/chapter/5)

Phew. I'm doing alright. D:

xXhayleyroxXx
14-07-11, 22:02
Oooo it's getting interesting-er <3 That's not even I word but, y'know. Snuggling ftw :D <3

I don't know what else to say D: There's nothing to improve <3 xxxxxxx

FloTheMachine
14-07-11, 22:03
Ah c'mon. There must be something I could do better. >_<
But thankies. :hug::hug::hug:

xXhayleyroxXx
14-07-11, 22:06
Ah c'mon. There must be something I could do better. >_<
But thankies. :hug::hug::hug:

Apart from your unintentional paragraph abuse, there's really not xD xxxxxx

FloTheMachine
14-07-11, 22:07
:vlol:
Booksie kills my paragraphs. ;_;

xXhayleyroxXx
14-07-11, 22:10
:vlol:
Booksie kills my paragraphs. ;_;

Yeah, Yeah ~ Blame it on Booksie ;D

Lol I know, how dare it! xD