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Dark Lara
17-02-04, 21:30
I have been writing poems for quite some time now,& I want to share some with all of you http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/grouphug.gif . They're dark & miserable poems. If you would like to see them, ask me through a private message, or email if you want http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/bash.gif . Don't expect them to be happy & possitive(you have been warned http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/privateeye.gif ).

Geck-o-Lizard
17-02-04, 21:35
May I read one (or more, if you're willing to let me see)? I know that poetry is a very good way to express emotion; I'd be interested to hear what you have to say http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/wave.gif

rogue_eclipse
18-02-04, 00:23
Yes please share with me too.

Duffman
18-02-04, 00:38
Through the shadows beckons the light,
Through dark words, dark stories, comes sight,
Words of black and red,
Words with a means to an end,
Enlighten us with your words true,
so then we may be able to help you...

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justin
18-02-04, 01:30
Ahh the poetry i know best, sure i'd love to read them all http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

rogue_eclipse
18-02-04, 03:00
Nice job Duffman ;) http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/mischievous.gif

Celli
18-02-04, 03:46
I have some poetry too!

There once was a man from Nantucket....
His name was Bill.

http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/whistle.gif :D

Seriously though, I've had poetry published before. http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif I'll scrounge up one that I hope to have published someday. http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

Celli
18-02-04, 03:49
View from the Midnight Window

Under the harvest moon of brilliant gold,
With wind whispering through the trees
And water lightly lapping at the shore,
The night was at its brightest,
But soon that came to a swift end.

The ominous thunderheads looming up above
Overtook the radiant midnight golden treasure,
And the whispering winds turned to deafening shouts.
The shore pounded mercilessly by the crashing waves,
Then for but a brief moment the sky lit up
And everything seemed perfect again.
But soon the crash of thunder filled the air
As the sky began to cry.

It started as gentle weeping
But quickly turned violent,
As the howling wind stirred
The water into frenzy.
The sky was in turmoil, rage, confusion,
As if it were a person gone mad.
Any vessel not in its safe harbor
Was ne’er seen again.

This enraged tempest went on through the night
Carrying its destruction, yet leaving no trace.
As this storm is of a mysterious kind,
Coming with no warning, leaving no sign.
Vanishing as quickly as it had materialized.

The winds returned to their murmured whisperings
And the waters answering in sweet reply,
The autumn scenery undisturbed through the wild storm
Then, the faint melodies of a lark
Wafted through the serene forest by the sea
Like the song and beauty of a harp.

The harvest moon once again
Shone down upon that kingdom by the sea.
The leaves of robust harvest-time colors
Shining, glistening from the fallen rain.
As the night drifted on,
One single crimson leaf silently fell to the ground.

zebigbos
18-02-04, 03:55
Originally posted by Celli:
View from the Midnight Window

Under the harvest moon of brilliant gold,
With wind whispering through the trees
And water lightly lapping at the shore,
The night was at its brightest,
But soon that came to a swift end.

The ominous thunderheads looming up above
Overtook the radiant midnight golden treasure,
And the whispering winds turned to deafening shouts.
The shore pounded mercilessly by the crashing waves,
Then for but a brief moment the sky lit up
And everything seemed perfect again.
But soon the crash of thunder filled the air
As the sky began to cry.

It started as gentle weeping
But quickly turned violent,
As the howling wind stirred
The water into frenzy.
The sky was in turmoil, rage, confusion,
As if it were a person gone mad.
Any vessel not in its safe harbor
Was ne’er seen again.

This enraged tempest went on through the night
Carrying its destruction, yet leaving no trace.
As this storm is of a mysterious kind,
Coming with no warning, leaving no sign.
Vanishing as quickly as it had materialized.

The winds returned to their murmured whisperings
And the waters answering in sweet reply,
The autumn scenery undisturbed through the wild storm
Then, the faint melodies of a lark
Wafted through the serene forest by the sea
Like the song and beauty of a harp.

The harvest moon once again
Shone down upon that kingdom by the sea.
The leaves of robust harvest-time colors
Shining, glistening from the fallen rain.
As the night drifted on,
One single crimson leaf silently fell to the ground.Woaw http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif I liked it a lot :D

laracroft8290
18-02-04, 04:19
I like it when people say that "depressing poetry" is well depressing but to me it's not. Am I the only one?

Duffman
18-02-04, 11:13
i agree lc8290 - sometimes it is... sometimes its not...

thanks rogue - i wrote that so Dark Lara would feel okay about showing us the poetry http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/wave.gif

Dark Lara
18-02-04, 13:51
I already sent it through private message to most of you. Here's one I wrote resently. It's called "The Pain You Cause Me". I wrote this because something bad has to happen to anyone I care about & everyone I care about ends up being mad at me.

My curse
My pity
My sorrow

It hurts
It's always this way

If only it were different
If only you can see

I find a knife,
with my skin

Oh my pain
Oh my sorrow
Oh my suffering

If only you can see,
The Pain You Cause Me

Dark Lara
19-02-04, 18:29
If anyone wants me to post more, let me know.

bubbleblaster
19-02-04, 18:30
can u pm me some of ur poetry plz http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

MizzXCroft
19-02-04, 21:50
All of them are....wow.....it makes me cry...*sniff* I need a tissue..

Dark Lara
19-02-04, 23:39
Then prepare to cry some more. This one's called, "Children Of Darkness"

No one loves them
No one are loved by them

Hearts died & turned black
Hearts that may never come back

It's dark from where they are
Some call it an unhealed scar

Even in their own home,
they feel alone

MizzXCroft
20-02-04, 00:38
WOW..it's as if I can relate to every word that I read.