Tomb Raider Legend Fan Fiction

[mau3genius]

Hi :wve: , I finished translating chapter VI. I'll publish them in fanfiction.net tonight. :cool:



En español...

Capítulo I (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/1/)

Capítulo II (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/2/)

Capítulo III (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/3/)

Capítulo IV (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/4/)

Capítulo V (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/5/)

I hope you enjoy them and don't get bored! :D

[Apofiss]

Quite good, I red them all!

Chapter V
...but I did not resist the wounds and escapedHe couldn't resist the wounds? :D

Chapter IV
Lara has managed to open the crystalline prison, and at the same time as she crosses the strange place, Kristina and her colleagues continue chatting.I wonder, where exactly they (villains) are standing in that moment? ...and Lara, where is she located (in the mansion) in that moment?

BTW I like the idea about Kurtis and dreams. http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/thumb.gif

[mau3genius]

*Incesant Gibberish of an ignorant foreigner go here*

[Apofiss]

The story starts in the mansion-, and then Leigh, Boaz and Natla take her to a place Aha, ok so Lara (and other good characters) are located in the mansion till...which chapter exactly? > 2nd, 3rd or 4th?

Sorry if I'm too pushy, I'm just curious. :D

And what is that crystal prison? How does it look? Lara is kind of inside in it or it's just near her? http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/privateeye.gif

[mau3genius]

Lara and the others are in the mansion till Chapter III, from here to all the others, she's in the "building".

The crystal prison, is an idea I took from a well known expresion, refering to someone that take care of other person, in an annoying way...
The crystal prison is just that, a room, done all in unbreakable (?) crystal. It have one entrance, of crystal too, that can be activated with a code, that only Boaz knows (I didn't put this info, cause it wasn't really necessary to keep the story). Lara is inside the crystal prison, and with the chirugai, she can break the crystal and get out. Something that anybody noticed: She is in her night-shirt. And thanks to Boaz that make her sleep with the gas, she get the chirugai and can get out of the prison.

[Apofiss]

Ok I got it now, correctly. Thanks http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/wave.gif

[mau3genius]

Chapter VI published! Read it here (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475775/6/)

Cápítulo VI publicado! Leelo aquí (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/6/)


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[ 17. July 2005, 04:08: Message edited by: mau3genius ]

[Laras L3gend813]

:eek: Thats brilliant!!! http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/thumb.gif

[mau3genius]

Maybe tonite I'll publish the next chapter, and I'm writing the IX chapter :mis: ... We're getting close to the ending... :pi:

[ 18. July 2005, 16:13: Message edited by: mau3genius ]

[mau3genius]

When I say tonight, I'm talking about Argentinian time, GMT +4 or 5 that is.

[mau3genius]

:wve: Hi,

Capítulo VII, publicado (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/7/) ;)

:whi: By the way, in chapter VII, in english, I made a great mistake. I put "or some another thing" a terrible terrible mistake. I tryed to fix it, but I don't know why the hell fanfiction.net didn't detect it! Of course I put "Or any other thing" but, I couldn't change that horrible phrase... I'm sick and tired of this ****ing **** of fanfiction.net! :mad: Certainly, I do not recommend fanfiction.net at all! It's garbage, it's ugly, and slow, and you have to refresh more than 1 time to watch the pages :mad: !!

EDIT. O RLY? This fanfiction is full of horrible mistakes. Bye bye to the English version for now :wve:

[ 20. July 2005, 17:15: Message edited by: Neteru ]

[mau3genius]

I need some help here!! :D Please... Tell me all the locations of AoD (the cities and the countries where they are)

And... Where does AoD finish? In which city, country???

Thanks!

I know that:
Prague = Czech Republic
Paris = France

but, tell me all the cities and all that stuff!

[SMSL]

I think it's only those 2 cities, really... I mean, she starts in Paris, then she goes to Prague, to Vassiley's, then she's taken to the Strahov, which it's also there, and she wonders by the Biodome, Aqua Research, the Vault of Trophies (which is beneath the Srahov), Lost Domain and Eckhardt's. Assuming she didn't take long enough to cross a country, through the caves, Ecckhardt's Lab, the end, was still in Prague.

[mau3genius]

So only two places? Great :D !

Thank you SMSL! Now I can finish my fanfic!!

[SMSL]

Don't say that, people have been reading it, eh? http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

And you're welcome. Oh, just in case you don't know, AOD's sequel was supposed to take place in Turkey. Just in case you need ideas for more locations, or someting.

[Apofiss]

Originally posted by mau3genius:
But it's the same... Anybody's gonna take a time to read so, it's just for me :D I read your fanfic too, only cause I'm interested in this story. http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/wave.gif

[mau3genius]

:cool: Capítulos VIII (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/8/) IX (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/9/)

You'll have to wait for the ending... I think I published all the chapters with just a little difference of time, and that killed the interest and the curiosity... BTW, As the same time I'll put the last chapter of the fanfic, I'll put an AoD video in FileFront, "The Girl Can Rock".

[cerilla]

Mau3genius, you really don't know where is Prague? :/ it's the capital city of Czech Republic, and as far as I'm concerned Czech Republic and Poland are two different countries :D

[mau3genius]

I took off the English version since it's full of spelling and grammar mistakes

El Capítulo Final (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475786/10/)

Espero que les guste! :wve: