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Lavinder
02-10-05, 13:00
And were back! Officially rated T http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/tongue.gif

Hope you like it because it took me http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/censored.gif long.

In heaven (Rated T) (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2606447/1/)

[ 05. October 2005, 20:16: Message edited by: Lavinder ]

Hazel
02-10-05, 13:34
very good Lav! :D Brillaint! http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/thumb.gif are you writing more?
I loved it! keep up the work, great story, hope you write more! http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/jumper.gif

Lavinder
02-10-05, 13:40
He He, glad you like it. I'm kinda thinking people will think im pervy for writing it because im only 13.

yes i will be writing more when the time comes but ive been writing solid for ages now and my friends need me to talk with them lol

[ 02. October 2005, 14:43: Message edited by: Lavinder ]

Hazel
02-10-05, 14:41
Tsk, no you're not pervy, lol you should see the girls at the Sani, now they're pervy, lol! Lol and besides I know alot of girls younger than you, who are ALOT more pervy then you! LOL. can't wait to read the next part, it was very good, i liked the one liners Kurtis and Lara had, very funny!

Lavinder
02-10-05, 15:01
lol, I tried to make it as funny, non corny, serious as I could ... Anything anyone would like to see in the next part would be much apretiated?

Hazel
02-10-05, 16:28
um, the bad guy return maybe?? Joachim Karel returns....to haunt them! Mwhaaahhhh!

Lavinder
02-10-05, 16:34
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[ 05. October 2005, 20:09: Message edited by: Lavinder ]

Lavinder
05-10-05, 19:18
We are back, finished and fixed my first chapter and the second chapter is on the way. Been writing in between tv, homework, school, and computer lol. Been pretty hectic so it's taking me longer to do simple chapters.

Hope you enjoy!

Lavinder
05-10-05, 19:19
We are back, finished and fixed my first chapter and the second chapter is on the way. Been writing in between tv, homework, school, and computer lol. Been pretty hectic so it's taking me longer to do simple chapters.

Hope you enjoy!

Jacob x5
06-10-05, 05:27
I've read up to the kitchen table bit and I'll read more later on. It's very nice http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

[ 06. October 2005, 16:04: Message edited by: jacob jacob jacob jacob jacob ]

Lavinder
06-10-05, 07:21
Rofl, thats such a funny phrase Jacob...

I'm so sorry about those 3 posts above lol. Dont know how that happened

Neteru
06-10-05, 14:21
As is your terminology Jacob. You need to rein it in and bear in mind this is an all age forum with rules about vulgarity and sexually oriented posts!

Jacob x5
06-10-05, 15:05
Message edited.

I'm so sorry, it was first thing in the morning but there was no excuse. I know this is an all-age forum and I should have been more conciderate. Again, I'm very sorry, it won't happen again I'm sure http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

Neteru
06-10-05, 15:18
OK Jacob. http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

Jacob x5
06-10-05, 15:56
I can't find the rules code of conduct thing on the website I was going to read it. Again, my apoligies Neteru, I'm not normally like that! http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/thumb.gif

By the way Lavinder, what does Rated T mean?

Lavinder
06-10-05, 20:06
Suitable for teens, 13 years and older, with some violence, minor coarse language, and minor suggestive adult themes.

T meaning Teens http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

Jacob x5
07-10-05, 05:03
Oohhh ok! :D So basically if someone younger than that reads this it's their fault for not reading that lol. But I didn't know what it meant because I'm not familier with rating like that with letters. On films I've seen it differently but maybe not on stories. http://www.tombraiderforums.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

Lavinder
07-10-05, 13:49
It has a rating guide on fanfiction.net. Ok heh, bit off topic people ?