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tombraider123
23-03-06, 18:51
Ok, our homework is to right a rhyming prologue about a movie. I chose Tomb Raider, basically we have to rite a poem about it, and it has to rhyme.

Can anyone help? Im having so much trouble, i cannot rite any poetry.

If anyone can help, can they not use big words, as then the teacher will no it is not my work, lol!

Thanks if you can help ;)

Neteru
23-03-06, 18:57
So basically what you're saying is 'Can someone else do my homework for me?'

Tut tut.

Jacob x5
23-03-06, 18:58
So basically what you're saying is 'Can someone else do my homework for me?'

Tut tut.

*Joins in with the tutting*. :ton:

RAID
23-03-06, 19:09
how long must it be???

Yuna´s Wish
23-03-06, 19:12
I would help you, but I have never written any poem in English:(

SUGARPIE
23-03-06, 19:15
Here is something simple for you without big words ;)

Lara Croft is rather soft,
Despite her guns and stuff.
She keeps her weapons in the loft,
300 guns are enough.

She loves her butler and his silver tray,
But she likes to lock him up.
When he appears she looks away,
And hopes he will go astray!

Egypt comes and Egypt goes,
But the artefacts keep her keen.
The butler always irons her clothes
In spite of her being mean.

ETC.... Just a thought to get you in the mood!! Hope it helps :wve:

RAID
23-03-06, 20:10
To see the world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour

Everything that is lost
Is meant to be found
The secrets of the past
Will then be unbound

Ancient venues and tombs
Are what she lives for
Discovering secrets
Of times that were before

The Triangle of Light
She longs to find
It gives God's power
Control time with mind.

When the planets are one
The clock starts to count
And the All-Seeing Eye
Gets bright like a fount

Seek out Lara's clock
Are people of the light
Raid her house they will
They will put up a fight

Then off to Cambodia
She'll get the first peice
And guardians awake
Protectors of the peice

The caves of Seberia
Behind those walls of ice
Guarded by savage winds
She'll roll the final dice

Greenkey2
23-03-06, 20:30
:pi:

@ Raid:


Ist thou suggesting that thy humble student vulgerise thine own work with that of W. Blake? Thoust should be ashamed of thyself! ;) :cln:

Sorry, my poetry is on a whimsical slant right now - not quite suitable for Miss Croft's tastes :rolleyes:

The Butler
23-03-06, 20:33
She loves her butler and his silver tray,
But she likes to lock him up.
When he appears she looks away,
And hopes he will go astray!



:( CHARMING lol

i wont go astray

RAID
23-03-06, 20:34
oops, looks like I forgot something...:whi:

Lavinder
23-03-06, 20:35
So basically what you're saying is 'Can someone else do my homework for me?'

Tut tut.

Reminds me of me and my History homework :o

RAID
23-03-06, 20:35
:pi:

@ Raid:


Ist thou suggesting that thy humble student vulgerise thine own work with that of W. Blake? Thoust should be ashamed of thyself! ;) :cln:

Sorry, my poetry is on a whimsical slant right now - not quite suitable for Miss Croft's tastes :rolleyes:

OK. It's fixed. Now it looks like a title like it was supposed to be :)


To see the world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour

Everything that is lost
Is meant to be found
The secrets of the past
Will then be unbound

Ancient venues and tombs
Are what she lives for
Discovering secrets
Of times that were before

The Triangle of Light
She longs to find
It gives God's power
Control time with mind.

When the planets are one
The clock starts to count
And the All-Seeing Eye
Gets bright like a fount

Seek out Lara's clock
Are people of the light
Raid her house they will
They will put up a fight

Then off to Cambodia
She'll get the first peice
And guardians awake
Protectors of the peice

The caves of Seberia
Behind those walls of ice
Guarded by savage winds
She'll roll the final dice

I hope it helps you tombraider123

Greenkey2
23-03-06, 20:39
Lol Raid :D


Could you possibly show us your final poem when it's finshed, tombraider123? :)