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BlackGrey
07-05-06, 18:44
Don't put move this into the art forum, it's not art... Its called branded...

My life’s not complex,
It’s me who’s complex,
Complex influx of thoughts,
Shorts my brain,
A severe inner pain,
Its lame,
Its shame,
For whom I am,
I’m not yet a man,
Yet they tell me they know,
Know I’m gay,
No I say,
Everyday,
How did I know my youthful play,
Would turn my life this way,
Turn everyone popular away,
The fibres that fray,
Fray the fibres of my sanity,
Of my compassion for humanity,
Not that they’re all this way,
I say their have been one or two,
That have said: I love you,
They are gone now
And I bow my head,
I want to crawl to bed,
Bed myself for ever in a soft bed,
In a little box shed in the ground,
Bound by a tight nail seal,
Where I can’t feel,
Where attention begins to peel,
Away from me, I move the knife,
Away from me,
I can’t be killing myself,
Not for a word,
It’s too absurd,
But so are they’re looks,
What have I done to be branded,
Landed my first kiss on a boy,
Began to toy with feelings for the first time,
Though it wasn’t the last time,
That they’d tell me it was wrong,
They’d brand me forever…

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 18:58
So um... yeah...

tombraiderluka
07-05-06, 19:02
Hi:wve:

RoseTyler
07-05-06, 19:02
Erm...

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 19:03
Note to self: Don't post poems...

Lew
07-05-06, 19:08
Cool poem :tmb:

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 19:10
Cool poem :tmb:

Thanks Lew :p

MiCkiZ88
07-05-06, 19:10
Note to self: Don't post poems...
:vlol: that's reall ynice one :D and I mean nice.. since my dad is a poemist ( is that how you spell it :rolleyes: )

tha_mattster
07-05-06, 19:14
poet!



(muffled laughter)

_Mica_
07-05-06, 19:14
Nica poem BG. :tmb: Very... I can't think of the word, atm... :pi:

But it's very good. :)

tha_mattster
07-05-06, 19:15
Nica poem BG. :tmb: Very... I can't think of the word, atm... :pi:

But it's very good. :)

Tyrannasaurus Rex? Is that the word?

Shark_Blade
07-05-06, 19:17
Just wanna make sure.
Is it about you or you just wrote it out of inspiration? If it's about you, we can talk a whole lot more openly. If it's inspiration, that's some masterpiece you wrote there.

Jacob x5
07-05-06, 19:20
Erm...

I was confused aswell. :p

And about your signature...

Good thing I didn't take you to the deep south. :tea:

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 19:22
Just wanna make sure.
Is it about you or you just wrote it out of inspiration? If it's about you, we can talk a whole lot more openly. If it's inspiration, that's some masterpiece you wrote there.

Yes it's about me...

RoseTyler
07-05-06, 19:32
I was confused aswell. :p

And about your signature...

Good thing I didn't take you to the deep south. :tea:

:ton: :D


Anyway yeah... interesting poem BlackGrey. Its very well written.

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 19:34
I believe you :p

Shark_Blade
07-05-06, 19:36
Yes it's about me...
I need to read your poem again and again just to make sure I got what you're saying.

Sounds sad, sorry bout that.
Teen experience:
Some boys called me gay too and I actually get into a brawl because of this.

I just walk away from all that and find friends that accept me for who I am. It's tough at first being lonely, but it is all worth it when you found them.And we are all here for you too you know. :hug: Don't let these things ruin your life. You set your own life, not somebody else.

Well, I've been fooling around with my mates too in the past, come to think of it :rolleyes::cln:

Rivendell
07-05-06, 19:36
Strong stuff, excellent pace.. As for the story, :hug: :)

Janny
07-05-06, 19:39
The poem sound pretty deep, sorry if your feeling sad.
I can see you put your soul into the poem, and that's all that matters.

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 19:39
Thank you so much SharkBlade, Rivendell and Janny. Means alot.

Airave
07-05-06, 19:41
A touching and honest insight,
artistically put as well.

Hold on to yourself and enjoy your life.
Be smart and don't give more away
than is neccesary. Give yourself time
to think and reflect, in the future,
befor painting yourself any certain color.

You must ultimately decide
what you want and get in life.

Once you have a jacket, it is hard to lose.
Living well and succeeding in life is the
best revenge in most all cases.

Forgive! Yourself and others.
You will Live so much happier!

Rivendell
07-05-06, 19:41
Hope life brightens up for you soon BlackGrey, it's not nice feeling glum in that way.

Shark_Blade
07-05-06, 19:43
Thank you so much SharkBlade, Rivendell and Janny. Means alot.
No sweat BlackGrey:hug:

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 19:43
Once again, thank you :hug:

Greenkey2
07-05-06, 19:47
That is an amazingly touching and thoughtful poem, BlackGrey :tmb: I'd love to read some more of your poetry some day :)

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 19:47
Most of it's really emo, green key :D

xMiSsCrOfTx
07-05-06, 20:08
Like I said, BlackGrey, that's a very deep poem. You're an excellent writer. :tmb:

Lara Lover
07-05-06, 20:09
Awesome poem! :tmb:

BlackGrey
07-05-06, 20:10
Very kind words, thank you :hug:

saray
07-05-06, 20:13
wow, that was possibly the best poem i have ever read. it was so thoughtful, and well written. if only i had the gift you have for poetry writing :hug:

GodOfLight
08-05-06, 21:51
hey ric :wve:

sorry the first few repsonses to this poem were so... rude? wish i had seen it sooner.

i absolutley HATE poetry, but this really is fantastic.

youve written something very beautiful and moving. a true artist is always someone who has been profoundly hurt, and can take his pain turn it into something beautiful. this what you've achieved here i think. :hug:

Rivendell
08-05-06, 21:53
You feeling any better today Blackgrey?