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Old 22-12-08, 12:07   #1
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Description Of The Game.

Lara hunts for an artefact in the Desrts of Iran called The Haira Stone, Lara later finds out that this Stone can give you indistructible armour she becomes obsessed with finding it.

Locations :

Lara travels around the world to find 7 artefacts and only one place where she can unite these artefacts.
  • Greece
  • Iran
  • Morrocco
  • The Bermuda Triangle
  • Iraq
  • Egypt
  • Croft Manor
  • Babylon
  • French Alps
Weapons:
Should be stronger and weaker.
  • Dual UZIs
  • Dual Pistols
  • Assault Rifle
  • Shotgun
  • Tranqulizer Gun
  • Crossbow
Enemies:
SHould be stronger an dthey should know what they are doing. Bosses should be added.
  • Medusa
  • Cerberus
  • Sphinxes
  • Bats
  • Rats
  • Spiders
  • Giant Snakes
  • Giant Scorpions
  • The Hydra
  • Anubis
  • Lizard People.
  • Giant Lizards.
  • Crocodiles.
  • Kraken ( An even bigger one)
  • Sir. Francis Brenard
  • Mercinaries
  • Seth
  • Sirens
  • Minotaur
Vehicles:
Should be used in every single level.
  • Jet Ski
  • Yacht
  • Bike
  • Quad Bike
Gameplay:
These ideas should be taken into consideration.
  • Camera to be improved
  • Lara's moves when she is shooting should be improved into the ones from anniversary.
  • When she is knocked down by an enemy we should press a button that will help Lara stand up quickley.
  • Adrenaline momments should be used more often, after we bring down a boss to its lowest strength we should have to use them.
  • When Lara, jumps into adrenaline mode against the enemies the way she jumps and pushes against them should be improved.
  • Bring the slide back from Legend.
  • Allow swan diving from ledges.
  • Improve the grapple animations.
  • Improve the way Lara walks and balances on beams and poles.
  • Lara's breathing should be reduced to a minute.
  • Punching should be added and kicking should be improved.
  • Stealth mode shoul dbe added.
  • In legend and anniversary if we kept on holding on to the jump key she would jump longer, bring that back.
  • Sprints should be back.
  • Sprint jumps should be added and Lara should be able to jump wider gaps while using them, but after landing she has to roll and then stand back up again.
  • Make the enemies harder to kill.
  • Bring back bosses.
  • Rock Climbing Should be Back!
  • DO NOT INTRODUCE ENEMIES IN A CUTSCENE!!!!!NOT EVEN BY SHIFTING THE CAMERA A LITTLE!! BUT BOSSESS OF COURSE, YOU HAVE TO!
Details:
Also these, spend more time on the details and how you could make the game realistic.
  • Add more detail onto the environments.
  • Detail rocks, mud, water and vegitation and temples.
  • Water should be more realistic, in an underwater level the water should have currents, blurry places, tides, dark places, plankton.
  • Lara should reacts to the environment, by looking wet by making her hair stick to her face untill she is dry, making her clothes darkes.
  • A portion of the dust and mud should be removed from Lara if she touches a portion of water.
  • If a portion of Lara touches the water, only the portion that touched the water should be wet.
  • There should be a change in time! Do you seriously think Lara will spend an hour in a tomb? It should go from day to evening to night.

Croft Manor:
  • Newly built manor
  • Old and new rooms available
  • The ability to explore the catacombs.
  • The ability to go outside the manor
  • Similiar to the one from Legend.
  • Keep the puzzles.

Story:

Iran:
Lara After reading an article on a stone called the Haira Stone which can give you indestructible armour in an old book in Eddington's library, she has explored half the world by now searching for the artefact, obsessed she is not quiting. Leaving a temple in the Amazonian Jungle, feels dissapointed she looks around for one last glimpse and notices something written on the wall.

There are numbers written in Incan, Lara reads the numbers translates them and records them on her cam, she then talks about what this artefact can do and how it is helpful. She then walks out of the temple walking up to her bike then she reaches to her PDA and talks to zip , she tells him the numbers, which of course are coordinates he then tells her that the location is Iran.

Lara smiles, and starts to drive and the screen fadess to black.

A menu shows up, like the one from Underworld talking about how Lara can use this artefact and what it does but giving you a list of weapons to choose from. But no outfit selection (Because the rest should be unlockable), it loads and another cutscene loads, Lara on her motor bike driving ahead, then Lara stops she looks at her PDA which shows her a map, and the reaches for her cam and zooms to a blurry shadow. She smiles and says to herself that shes almost there.

The nest sequence is gameplay you are on Lara's bike and a small window tells you the controls and how to drive the bike, now you have to drive to the temple on your own, but the map is accesible from the PDA, This may take you some time because of the area ( It should be big!!! And there should be no path!!), You are to jump some pits if you run into some and and Lara should sweat and breath heavily.

When you reach the temple, a cutscene shows you the entire temple and Lara reading and translating the arabic inscriptions. The inscriptions talk about a powerful leader who used the relics to build the city. After that cutscene there is a puzzle where you have to solve a puzzle to open the doors(dont be fooled, the puzzles should be hard! VERY HARD!) After you solve the puzzle a scene shows you the doors opening, and you hear whispers and you see dust coming out.

Then you have to ride your bike into the temple untill you see a pile of large rocks and you cannot continue any further with yor bike, so you climb over the rocks explore the temple, fight some bats, rats, crocodiles some fearsome mythological creatures and a couple of groups of grave robbers. You explore deeper into the temple solving about 5 puzzles to open doors, and you reach a room.

This room is probably the top room, and as you walk in you notice something glowing in purple. A cutscene loads and shows us Lara walkin up to the purple glow, she reads and translatles the inscription in the wall and records them on her camera, the inscription says something about the artefacts that they were too powerful and that the ruler became evil after using them and that the people destroyed him and buried him here.

Lara looks puzzled, she wonders why would armour make a person evil, she walks up to the artefact grabs it and gets sucked into a portal. Lara wakes up in a desert, there is nuthing but sand and the sky is orange, she walks and walks untill she finds a short pole she examines the pole and sees that the whole it is in is deeper so she pulls it and the floor starts to rumble, Lara walks back untill she is safe, then she sees that what looks to be a building is rising, she examines it untill it rises upcompletley and admires the view of the architecture and vegitation that is in the building, she thinks to herself could this be? Is this The Great Garden Of Babylon?

The next part is gameplay, as you have to walk in to the templ and explore a small part of it (This part should be very short), you later find yoursefl in the gardend themselves as Lara reaches to some flowers, when she grabs them they dissapear and then the floor starts to fall off and she falls, She sees an image of a temple in Egypt and the same rock only with different patterns on it and the rock fades into the image of the temple.

Lara falls and wakes up with the stone with her, a man walks up to Lara while she is on the floor, he tells her: Ms. Croft, my name is Sir Frances Bernard, he tells her that she would probably have heard him before in a snobby way, she looks at him in a bad way and tells him that she hasnt had the plesiure he turns around and talks about what the artefact does and that he is after it too she frowns in a sarcastic way and grabs her guns, she says that she hasnt got time for this, she asks him why shouldnt she kill him he says, that he knows the location to every single stone, she tucks her guns away in a bad way, he looks at her and smiles she walks up and punches him then his mercinaries aim at Lara, he laughs and tells them to tuck their guns away, he walks out and says see you in Egypt snaps his fingers and laughs in a menecing way, Lara notices that he is crazy she looks at his mercinaries in a suspicious way and readys her guns and the mercinaries smile.

The next part is all game play the mercinaries are shooting at you and you have to kill them all, by kicking, punching, sliding, throwing sticky grenades and shooting, after you kill them a samll scene shows you that the temple is rumbling and you have to run out of it, you have to sprint and get to your bike and drive out killing mercinaries on the way.

Then Lara drives out of the falling temple and she contacts zip and winston from her PDA and talks to him telling him to get her a list and a picture of all the temples in Egypt he does and she recognizes a temple that hasnt been discovered yet and drives off on her bike and out to the opend desert again.

Croft Manor:

Lara walking across the hall, heading down the stairs and to the Tech room, she looks at her newly built manor, and walks up to zip. She puts the stone onto the glass table and taks about what she saw in the vision, and what she recorded in her camera. He tells her that the site in Egypt still hasnt been discovered yet, Winston tells her the stone has a resemblance to the one Amanda has.

SHe looks at the stone in a puzzled way, she sees that the stone is attracted to her hand, so she puts it on the table and it quickley attaches to her hand, and as she looks closley to her hand she sees that it is forming an armour for her full arm. She looks amazed she talks about the armour being indistructibe so she looks at her gun on the table she grabs it and shoots the armour, and she sees a hole then she looks closley and the holr rebuilds itself! She closely looks at it and feels a chill she shakes her head lightly.

She removes the stone and looks at Zip and Winston. She tells them that the next peice of the stone is located in Egypt, she tells them to book a ticket to Egypt and she tells winston to ready her outfits and gear. He agrees and walks up the stairs.

She walks away, and the screen fades to black.

Egypt:

The next cutscene loads and it shows lara driving her bike through a valleyshe seems to be driving to the temple, Lara looks at a map on her PDA and then tucks it back away and the cutscene finishes.

The screen loads and the next part is gameplay, you have to drive your bike to the temple this part is verybig you have to drive through the canyon untill you reach the temple and you will encounter mericinaries on the way,you have to shoot some barrels so that they explode, the mercinaries are up in the canion.

When you reach the temple, there has to be a checkpoint there.
There is no scene you just have to climb up above the gates and solve a puzzle. You have to use your grapple and your gunsmainly for this one. You then you have to drive your bike into the temple explore untillyou reach a room, There is a very large Sphinx in the middle there is a poolon each corner you have to open some doors in the pools swim into them and get some a key to unlock the doors to the sphinx.

You will meet some Sphinxes, mummies, bats, crocodiles, spiders and scorpions on the way and they should all be large! Once you walkin to the doors to the Sphinx you should face some creatures, you go back up to your bike to where it was which was up at the entrance, you then you ride your bike and into the door youve opened into the next couple of rooms.

There are a couple more of puzzles you have to solve and then you reach the next room. The next room is a puzzle, its 3 puzzles in 1 where you unlock doors that have traps in them that you must pass to get keys, traps like escaping from rolling boulder, deadly spike traps (LIKE IN MEXICO) etc.....

The first puzzle in the 3 in 1 is that you mus do something to open the doors and get the keys, the second part is a hard puzzle you have to do with the keys you ust match the keys to the right panel (YOU FIGURE THIS OUT CD!). the the next one is even tougher than the second one you have to put the keys in and turn them in a direction, and the direction is located somewhere in the room.

You ride your bike into the next rooms, solve puzzles, escape traps and kill some enemies untill the final room.

A cutscene loads. Lara opens her camera and translates the hieroglyphics, it talks about the stone again and what it does and that the armour unlocks a gate to an even more powerful artefact, Lara gets the chill again, she rubs her eyes.....
And the wall infront of her is struck by an essence, Lara eilds her guns, points them at what Shot at her and gives a shocked look, she lookes at the thing, the camera shifts to the enemy and there he is, Anubis , Lara is still shocked, she stares at the creature and is aiming her guns she starts shooting and....

The next part is a boss fight, you have to shoot Anubis untill he reaches a certain life then a small scene will show that Anubis attracts her guns and they stick to his staff as he turns round to strike, Lara notices a glow on his back that seems to be a weak spot, she smiles in a menacing way and the scene finishes.

Back to gameplay here, you have to use your knife here (THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE FUN FOR WII PLAYERS), you must go close to Anubis and use the adrenaline to strike him, you must press the adrenaline button and you must aim the knife to where Lara should throw it onto the glow.

This cutscene shows anubis screaming, he yells and and explodes Lara swan dives before the explosion, Lara grabs the stone, she exmaines it for a while and then feels a rumble from the temple again, Again you must escape the temple here by your bike and your grenades (YOU WILL FIND SOME CAVE INS SO THE CAMERA SHIFTS A LITTLE TO TELL YOU THAT YOU HAVE TO THROW A STICKY GRENADE). Escape the temple and drive out of the temple, keep on driving untill a certain point and wait for the next scene.

A cutscene loads showing Lara reaching to her PDA and talking to zip & winston, saying that she found the artefact and what she encountered in there, she turns and looks at the temple, then she tells them shell ring later. She grabs the artefact out and examines it, she gets a chill again and then feels the stone being attracted to her other hand, forming an armour for her hand untill her arm, she smiles, and again feels the ground rumbling, she looks scared and puzzled and the ground shatters, she falls into the emptiness and screams, she stops and looks at th emptiness then the camera zooms to her eye and shows us Lara seeing things.

She sees people running and screaming, fires everywhere, and a shadow causing this mess, she runs up to the shadow looking at the people and as she gets close she tries to run to it but she falls once more to the emptiness. She then finds herself falling next to her bike she wonders why she didnt see a location.

She opens her PDA and talks to zip, she tells them that something destroyed the city, and to locate Brenard's current location, he tells her hes headed for the French Alps this momment. She agrees tells him to ready her winter suit and the snow bike and her gear.

French Alps:

You see Lara driving her bike throught the snow, she stops to see if there is any one there, and continues driving.

The next part is gameplay, you have to drive your bike through the snow, searching for anything, secrets and relics hidden in the snow, if you get lost you can access the map. When you reach a certain point where you have to go through a valley and as you reach the end cutscene starts.

Lara stops the bike and gets up, she hears men speaking, she notices that they are mercinaries (THEY SHOULD BOTH LOOK DIFFERENT), they talk about her driving her bike, she smiles, weilds her guns and gets ready. The next part is gameplay you have to kill the mercinaries....................

MORE TO COME!! PLEASE MODS DONT CLOSE THIS THREAD, I WANT TO POST THE STORY.

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Old 22-12-08, 12:21   #2
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hmmm, could be nice
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Old 23-12-08, 00:20   #3
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hmmm, could be nice
You should wait untill you know the story.
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Oolala!!! I like that! Especialy when we can get to the temple on our own, and that Lara sweats!
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Oolala!!! I like that! Especialy when we can get to the temple on our own, and that Lara sweats!
oh thanx!! thanx! my first nice comment I think, tune in, more will come.
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Updated!!!

EDIT: Sorry I double posted again!

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Except Lara and Zip, who are the others characters in your great idea game ? Amanda, Natla, Winston...?
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Except Lara and Zip, who are the others characters in your great idea game ? Amanda, Natla, Winston...?
What on earth do you mean? If youre talking aout the rest of the cast, well you will find out soon!!!
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i like it, sounds really cool!!
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i like it, sounds really cool!!
thanx!
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