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Old 22-09-10, 00:01   #21
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certainly hope not but if it turns out to be and if not finished in time i will still read it.(i'm a bookworm so reading it is fun for me(unless it is a genre out of my comfort zone))
Nothing is too ambitious for paper! I love to write Tomb Raider adventures myself, and it takes time and planning. Right now it seems you have the idea in your head. Organizing your thoughts and getting it down on paper are your next steps and, if done correctly, will strike the reader and engulf them in your adventure.

Don't give up yet!

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Old 22-09-10, 02:57   #22
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I loved it, Marluxia! I'm a big fan of Lara and her fondness for Winston. ^_^ On the one hand living forever with Winston sounds awesome... on the other I think she'd get bored eventually!
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Old 22-09-10, 18:36   #23
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Nothing is too ambitious for paper! I love to write Tomb Raider adventures myself, and it takes time and planning. Right now it seems you have the idea in your head. Organizing your thoughts and getting it down on paper are your next steps and, if done correctly, will strike the reader and engulf them in your adventure.

Don't give up yet!

8558 words, 13 pages, and we just now got in the ocean. Wheeeeee. MAYBE I can finish by the deadline.
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Old 22-09-10, 19:07   #24
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I'll start thinking.And I hope this time I won't miss the voting Good luck people!
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Old 22-09-10, 20:47   #25
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Great work everyone!
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Old 23-09-10, 11:38   #26
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"Zip,are we there yet?"Asked Lara impatiently.

"Lara can't you just wait for a moment?I know you're interested in finding that relic but the boat can't go any faster!"

"Okay okay,I'll sit here and wait untill we arrive at the island."

Lara was really getting bored,they've been travelling for hours and nothing interesting had happened.

"What the...what is this guy doing?"Zip asked while stearing to avoid a large ship that was blocking their way."

"Wait,I know that ship.It's Amanda!"Said Lara while picking up her pistols.

She was about to wear her backpack when suddenly Amanda hit their boat.Within seconds evrything was in the water.

"Zip!Zip!Where are you?"

"Right behind you."

"Oh,are you all right?"

"Fine,you?"

"I'm fine,where's Amanda?"

"She must be after our relic as well,she just sunk our boat and now is heading for the island."

"Not so fast,I won't let her have her way!Where's my PDA?"

"In the back pocket of your belt."

"Bloody hell,I didn't mange to wear my belt before Amanda hit our boat."

"Then let's hurry and find your belt before it get's dark out here."

Hours passed and none of the two managed to find any of their stuff,including Lara's belt.

"It's no use,we're stuck here!"Said Lara.

"Now,either someone will find us or either a shark will find us and eat us."

"I hope the first one occurs,because my pistols are pretty useless inside the water."

"Wait,something's moving.Ahhh!!!"Something have grabbed Zip's leg and was pulling him inside the water."

"Zip!Zip!What's going on?"

Zip came out of the water laughing."Hahaha,if only you could see your face!"

"Zip that's not funny!"

"What the..."

Something grabbed Zip again.

"Oh yeah Zip,I'm so scared now come out of the water."Nothing happenede."Zip?"

Something slippery grabbed Lara.It felt like a tentacle...no,it couldn't be.She struggled violently to free her self but the tentacle was holding her very tight.After a minute she fainted.

Lara woke up feeling really dizzy.She saw Zip binded in the walls.She tried to move but she noticed that she was binded as well.

"Zip,Zip!Wake up!"

"L-Lara...Where are we?"

"Inside the ruins of the Mediterranean sea.I remember this room clearly."

"So you remembered."Said someone from the darkness.

"What,who are you?What are you?"Said Lara

A large tentacle came out of the darkness and slapped Lara."You..."killed" me,remembere?"

"You can't be serious,are you that Kraken?"

"Hmmm,now you remember me.Why did you do that?Why you dropped that platform on my head,why?"

"Err...I had to...pass through the door and you were um...blocking my way."

"You could have just aked me to move."

"I'm sorry,I'm not normally speaking with Krakens or sea creatures."

"Anyway,it doesn't matter anyway.You and your friend are going to die.I will cause you the pain you caussed to me!"

"He grabbed Lara and Zip and started squishing them."

"Please stop!I'm sorry from what I did...argghhh...I didn't knew."

"Now it's too late to apologise.You and your friend will suffer untill you die."

"No,Zip doesn't have anything to do with this.At least let him go."

"It's ok Lara,we will die here.Together.It was a pleasure working with you."

"Zip..."

"Not so fast big seafood!"

"A-Amanda?"

"You really didn't believe I would let that giant sushi kill you.Only I have the right to kill Lara Croft.Now you are in trouble giant squid."

Amanda's hands started to glow.She must have somehow charged up her wraith stone.She lifted the Kraken and made it let Lara and Zip.They fell to the ground.It hurt a bit but at least they weren't being squished anymore.

"Now,it's time for the final blow!"

"Wait!If you throw it on the wall all the Mediterranean sea will get in here."

"You're right..."Amanda hated it when Lara was right and she was not.

She let the Kraken fell into the water.

"Thank you Amanda,it really..."

"Yeah yeah sure.Stop talking and let's go back."

THE END!!!

I hope you liked it
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Old 23-09-10, 23:47   #27
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lol, Amanda to the rescue!
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Old 26-09-10, 06:11   #28
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Yeah,I wanted to include her in a heroic and strange way in my story
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Old 27-09-10, 22:45   #29
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My story has lost it oomph. I barely had time to write over the summer holidays and so I put the story on hold until just this week, but it's not going so well. Now I'm running out of time for my own comp .
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Old 28-09-10, 05:36   #30
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My story has lost it oomph. I barely had time to write over the summer holidays and so I put the story on hold until just this week, but it's not going so well. Now I'm running out of time for my own comp .
I understand. I didn't enter mine.
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