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Midnight worries - a Fanfic
I recently wrote a fanfic for Catracoth's DMS (1 and 2), but it turned out to be an interesting story. Since I already have a vague idea of how this could go, Catracoth suggested starting a thread about it, and I thought it sounded like a good idea. So here it is!
So, basically everytime I write something new about this story I'll post it here in small pieces at a time, because I can't write extremely large pieces at once. If you find my story interesting, keep in touch with the thread! I can't promise you that this will be evolving quickly, though, since I have some other issues at the time being. Enough with the introduction, here are the first two parts for those that haven't read them! Enjoy, and please let me know what you think. I'm always open for reviews and criticism. (No suggestions, though, please!) Quote:
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Any updates will be added on the OP in link form, because I don't want the OP to be huge. Also from now on, the entries have names and numbers. 3.Mirrors and Truth. Last edited by msalpha2omega; 20-03-10 at 19:17. |
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19-03-10, 18:41 | #2 |
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Near the bottom, you would want "km" not "kms"
Well, that's the British way, at any rate Great story! |
19-03-10, 20:30 | #3 |
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Thanks for noticing that, I obviously haven't!!!
And awwww thank you honey!! |
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Absolutely and undeniably excellent, msalpha2omega. I love your writing style as much as the story. You're definitely a talented writer - I would be insulted if you didn't grace us with your skill more often .
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Thank you so much, both of you!
On the next part: Quote:
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Excuse me for double posting, but:
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I like the latest part a lot! The idea of mirrors is great!
The only thing I didn't really like was this line of dialogue: Quote:
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21-03-10, 12:13 | #9 |
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^Yeah I thought it might sound cliche too... Thanks, I'll change it a bit!
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