29-08-07, 13:32 | #1 |
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Three Poems By Me
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Lonely Traveller Lonely Traveller Short And Fat Hairy Gut And Hairy **** Here Come His Wears To The Woman He Cares To ***** Heaven City Where Higher Folk Pity Lonely Traveller Short And Fat He's Got No Clothes And Lost His Hat... *** 666 This World Is Populated By Living Dead Rotting Heads On Rotting Corpses In Rural Villages And Deserted Cities My Life Is Now A Ghostly Spectre Hovering In A Deserted Shopping Centre Gliding Down Grimy Allys And Climbing Through Once Busteling Valleys This Is The World 666 I Welcomed The End With Open Arms Here It Is I've Said Goodbye The Time Of Man Has Been And Gone Here Comes The Time Of Darkened Lands And Blood-red Sun... *** Is Suicide The Answer Is Suicide My Answer? What If I Get Cancer? So What If I'm A Mental Case? Cos Now I Know This World 'Ent My Place! What If I Slip Into Oblivion? That Could Be The End! I Crave The Liquid Gold Of Deadly Poison! And The Cold Hard Metalic Butt Of A Gun! I Just Want Death! And Yeah I'll Miss You Beff And Dom And Vik And Vix And Sarah And Alice And Lanah And Chel... ... Just Don't Tell... ... Them How I Feel! My Life Is Like An Orange Peal! One Minute Merry Fresh! The Next A Mound Of Rotting Safron Flesh! This Is My Life! This Could Have Been My Life! This Was My Life... ... Goodbye... Last edited by Stig911; 29-08-07 at 14:02. |
29-08-07, 17:02 | #2 |
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I like them . . really cool... I somehow find the last one one a little bit humorous I don't know why
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29-08-07, 18:58 | #3 |
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Cool they are really good, well done!! Got anymore?
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30-08-07, 07:10 | #4 |
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I have more, but some wouldnt be suitable for the forum, i handed the first one in as part of me GCSE poetry courcework, and the teacher gave me an A... even though the word i used.
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30-08-07, 07:33 | #5 |
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They are great You have a talant there the last one is my fav.
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30-08-07, 07:54 | #6 |
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I've Been Alone For Far To Long (Coming Out)
I've Been Alone For Far To Long
I've been alone for far to long In this world I've had no friends This road I walk is filled with bends Please tell me, what is it, that I've done wrong? In this school I'm missunderstood In this classroom I sit, just ignored Is it me, or of this life do I be bored? What can I do, with this life of mine, will it be any good? I sit alone in this dark, dark room With this knife and with this hatred And crimson blood spills as blade digs deep as I lay upon my bed I sit and wait, with pain filled patience, for the onset of oblivions doom Goodbye mum, goodbye dad, goodbye brother, good bye dog and goodbye friends I've walked this road and rounded these bends With this dark secret I've lived as its eaten away Just don't hate me when you find this and you read this final line Always has been, never will, for now its the end of my time ... I am gay... |
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