30-07-08, 23:31 | #1 |
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The Egyptian Goddess Who Got Stood Up at the Prom inspired by Paperdoll!
Okay, so Paperdoll's pixie sketch gave me some inspiration to start drawing my suckish drawing.
[IMG]http://i36.************/2h3bdyd.jpg[/IMG] so far so good |
30-07-08, 23:38 | #2 |
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Nice head and shoulders, but the neck look like a pyramid (wide in the bottom and narrow in the top), needs to be straight all the way up Good luck
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30-07-08, 23:48 | #3 |
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Did what you said, I'm quite pleased with her eyes and mouth, but I think i should lower the nose.
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31-07-08, 00:13 | #4 |
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I agree that you need to lower her nose a bit, but I don't see how you fixed the neck, it still looks the same to me
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31-07-08, 00:31 | #5 |
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I narrowed the top a bit, I don't want her to have a stick for a neck
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31-07-08, 00:59 | #6 |
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31-07-08, 00:59 | #7 |
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The neck actually looks worse. Look at yourself in the mirror or google a few pictures for reference. You have a cartoonish style but you should still stick to correct anatomy.
Kudos for creativity on the title and thanks XD glad I inspired you Also for the eye remember that it has an anatomy of it's own. Eyelids, tear ducts etc are all important parts of an eye. Even in a cartoonish style, you can implement them in some way to give your drawing more character. Last edited by Paperdoll; 31-07-08 at 01:01. |
31-07-08, 01:16 | #8 |
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Thanks for the help, I'm remaking the neck right now, but it doesn't seem to give me enough room, but I have an idea on how to fix that
I've also decided to color the image in black in white, but add red to the eyes, as in rage, sadness. |
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31-07-08, 01:23 | #10 |
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it's giving me troubles, but you know when women wore those necklaces stacked on top of each other, and it made their necks longer?
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