My fanfic-AoD continuation

Jordy · 12-07-05, 23:46

OK, so I wanted to write a continuation of the AoD storyline, but I also wanted to do something a bit different, so I came up with the idea of an alternate ending to AoD where Lara gives into her dark side and accepts Karel's offer to join him. I don't think Lara would really do that, but it's meant to be a sort of parallel universe story.

You can read the first 5 chapters here:

Reborn in Shadow at ff.net

I'm currently working on the sixth chapter.I'd love any comments or feedback from fellow Raiders (constructive of course)

fallen-angel · 13-07-05, 18:33

You know I love it Jordana.

My time on the internet is running out, but I will definitely read the new chapter when I get home.

Hazel · 19-07-05, 13:50

ohhhh, a new fan fic, well i loved all the others i read and this one seems interestingly different so i give it a read.

Jordy · 20-07-05, 01:13

Thanks Hazel

Hazel · 20-07-05, 10:23

No problem Jordana, i love reading people's stories, especially when theyy're about the gorgeuos Mr trent and the sexy Ms Croft. Lol.

I also love to write and am currently working on my own AOD fanfic, including the one and only the gorgeous tall, dark haired, blue eyed, sexy voiced, Mr Kurtis Trent.

It probably won't be very good, but i love writting the dialog between Kurtis and Lara!!

Jordana, i haven't had time to read your fanfic yet, i was going to read it yesterday but, i was alittle emotional as my best friend is moving away to Jersey and i won't be able to see her any more which is obviously very upsetting,

so i'll try and read it tonight.

charlotte101 · 20-07-05, 12:08

Hazel you are obssessed with young Mr Trent! (me too!)He is hot. Shame we won't see any more of him after AOD. Can't wait to read your story about him, I loved your continuation on 'One strange adventure'

Sorry to hear about your friend moving away. My best friend from primary school moved to switzerland when we left and then another of my friends a few years ago moved to Spain. But we still keep in contact and it is really the most exciting thing ever when they come to visit or vice-versa. I think when you have been friends with someone for a long time that you take it for granted that they will always be there. A couple of years ago my friends all went to University and I took a couple of years out and it was tough at first not having anyone around but we all still keep in touch and we make the most of our time together in the holidays

so don't worry chook xxx

[ 20. July 2005, 13:13: Message edited by: MissNATLA ]

focus · 20-07-05, 14:12

Hazel are u apart of the sani website if not u sould be and jordana i loved ur story , i really liked the change

Hazel · 20-07-05, 14:24

no im not part of the sani, i'm thinking about joining though, are u focus?
MissNatla, your so sweet, thatnks your kind words cheered me up, yeah your rights to sad to see a close friend go, but hopefully we'll stay in touch and write to one another, so its not all that bad, but it still hurts doesn't it?
Thanks about the one strange adventure thing, i enjoy writing but im not as good as people like FA, and all the others from the sani who write fanfic n stuff. lol.

Hazel · 21-07-05, 19:56

Is there an age restriction to be able to join the sani?

fallen-angel · 21-07-05, 20:53

Not at all Hazel. You should join up. We would be more than happy to have you over

19-07-05, 13:50	#3
Hazel Archaeologist Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Take a left turn at Earth, travel 50,0000 miles north to find Planet Hazel Posts: 1,170	ohhhh, a new fan fic, well i loved all the others i read and this one seems interestingly different so i give it a read. __________________ Smile like a penguin with a hedgehog up it’s arse!

20-07-05, 14:12	#7
focus Explorer Join Date: May 2005 Location: ireland Posts: 649	Hazel are u apart of the sani website if not u sould be and jordana i loved ur story , i really liked the change __________________ "well . . . here's to the pencil pushers. May they all die of lead poison."

20-07-05, 14:24	#8
Hazel Archaeologist Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Take a left turn at Earth, travel 50,0000 miles north to find Planet Hazel Posts: 1,170	no im not part of the sani, i'm thinking about joining though, are u focus? MissNatla, your so sweet, thatnks your kind words cheered me up, yeah your rights to sad to see a close friend go, but hopefully we'll stay in touch and write to one another, so its not all that bad, but it still hurts doesn't it? Thanks about the one strange adventure thing, i enjoy writing but im not as good as people like FA, and all the others from the sani who write fanfic n stuff. lol. __________________ Smile like a penguin with a hedgehog up it’s arse!

21-07-05, 19:56	#9
Hazel Archaeologist Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Take a left turn at Earth, travel 50,0000 miles north to find Planet Hazel Posts: 1,170	Is there an age restriction to be able to join the sani? __________________ Smile like a penguin with a hedgehog up it’s arse!

12-07-05, 23:46	#1
Jordy Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: SECRET BASE Posts: 886	OK, so I wanted to write a continuation of the AoD storyline, but I also wanted to do something a bit different, so I came up with the idea of an alternate ending to AoD where Lara gives into her dark side and accepts Karel's offer to join him. I don't think Lara would really do that, but it's meant to be a sort of parallel universe story. You can read the first 5 chapters here: Reborn in Shadow at ff.net I'm currently working on the sixth chapter.I'd love any comments or feedback from fellow Raiders (constructive of course)

13-07-05, 18:33	#2
fallen-angel Explorer Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Carlisle, UK Posts: 648	You know I love it Jordana. My time on the internet is running out, but I will definitely read the new chapter when I get home.

20-07-05, 01:13	#4
Jordy Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: SECRET BASE Posts: 886	Thanks Hazel

20-07-05, 10:23	#5
Hazel Archaeologist Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Take a left turn at Earth, travel 50,0000 miles north to find Planet Hazel Posts: 1,170	No problem Jordana, i love reading people's stories, especially when theyy're about the gorgeuos Mr trent and the sexy Ms Croft. Lol. I also love to write and am currently working on my own AOD fanfic, including the one and only the gorgeous tall, dark haired, blue eyed, sexy voiced, Mr Kurtis Trent. It probably won't be very good, but i love writting the dialog between Kurtis and Lara!! Jordana, i haven't had time to read your fanfic yet, i was going to read it yesterday but, i was alittle emotional as my best friend is moving away to Jersey and i won't be able to see her any more which is obviously very upsetting, so i'll try and read it tonight.

20-07-05, 12:08	#6
charlotte101 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: England Posts: 212	Hazel you are obssessed with young Mr Trent! (me too!)He is hot. Shame we won't see any more of him after AOD. Can't wait to read your story about him, I loved your continuation on 'One strange adventure' Sorry to hear about your friend moving away. My best friend from primary school moved to switzerland when we left and then another of my friends a few years ago moved to Spain. But we still keep in contact and it is really the most exciting thing ever when they come to visit or vice-versa. I think when you have been friends with someone for a long time that you take it for granted that they will always be there. A couple of years ago my friends all went to University and I took a couple of years out and it was tough at first not having anyone around but we all still keep in touch and we make the most of our time together in the holidays so don't worry chook xxx [ 20. July 2005, 13:13: Message edited by: MissNATLA ]

21-07-05, 20:53	#10
fallen-angel Explorer Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Carlisle, UK Posts: 648	Not at all Hazel. You should join up. We would be more than happy to have you over