Great pyramid showdown

Hefin · 18-06-05, 18:53

Lara pulls her self confidently out of the rank pool of water. The corse gravel floor bares invisible scars upon Lara's, already worn body.

Her mind and soul deteriate under the opression that a six days venture into Egypt gives. Home. What a lovely thought. That statue, the pool, the hedge maze, Winston.

Lara stode cautiously into the heart of the great pyramid. Her eyes flickered back and forth with a slight grin on her ever charming face.

Her thoughts seemed to last minutes ratherthan milliseconds. Her concerntration was swept effortlessly from the matter at hand - finding Natla. She thought, should I still be doing this? Am I getting too old for these school girl adventures? She decided that she was soon to become the great pyramid itself. Golden, youthfull and beautiful on the outside, but hards as stone on the inside, with a dull, grity personality.

" Hello Miss Croft." Natla sat perched on a stone ledge high above the ground. She dropped with a flutter before changing back to her human self.

"Ah, the three thousand year old egyptian with an American accent. Enjoyed your trip I hope? How was the bottom of that ravine?

"Ha ha ha your crude yet refined sense of humour never seices to amaze me. But when you're three thousand years old, you wont look this good will you? But it was a bloo** long time since Qualopec and the rest of those biggots dealt with me. Now i'm stronger.

Lara stepped complacently towards Natla
"Guess i'll have to finish what they started... And, i'll ask of you one thing, please dont swear,its not lady like."

"Oh ****-acky mushrooms, i didnt mean to, sorry." Natla took great pleasure in agrivating her enimies.

"I'm warning you"

" I didnt mean to... oh ****-tols"

"ok"

BANG

Neteru · 18-06-05, 19:01

Did you write this?

Hefin · 18-06-05, 19:04

yep - why?

Anyway, just out of curiosity, does anyone if Lara does swear? Dont ask why!

[ 18. June 2005, 20:06: Message edited by: Cubiculum Neohili ]

Neteru · 18-06-05, 19:09

Well if it's your very short story, I think it should go into Fan Artwork, Movies and Writings

Moving...

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18-06-05, 19:09	#4
Neteru Tomb Raider Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Albion Posts: 21,174	Well if it's your very short story, I think it should go into Fan Artwork, Movies and Writings Moving... __________________ CONSENSUS FACIT LEGEM

18-06-05, 18:53	#1
Hefin Historian Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Wales Posts: 490	Lara pulls her self confidently out of the rank pool of water. The corse gravel floor bares invisible scars upon Lara's, already worn body. Her mind and soul deteriate under the opression that a six days venture into Egypt gives. Home. What a lovely thought. That statue, the pool, the hedge maze, Winston. Lara stode cautiously into the heart of the great pyramid. Her eyes flickered back and forth with a slight grin on her ever charming face. Her thoughts seemed to last minutes ratherthan milliseconds. Her concerntration was swept effortlessly from the matter at hand - finding Natla. She thought, should I still be doing this? Am I getting too old for these school girl adventures? She decided that she was soon to become the great pyramid itself. Golden, youthfull and beautiful on the outside, but hards as stone on the inside, with a dull, grity personality. " Hello Miss Croft." Natla sat perched on a stone ledge high above the ground. She dropped with a flutter before changing back to her human self. "Ah, the three thousand year old egyptian with an American accent. Enjoyed your trip I hope? How was the bottom of that ravine? "Ha ha ha your crude yet refined sense of humour never seices to amaze me. But when you're three thousand years old, you wont look this good will you? But it was a bloo long time since Qualopec and the rest of those biggots dealt with me. Now i'm stronger. Lara stepped complacently towards Natla "Guess i'll have to finish what they started... And, i'll ask of you one thing, please dont swear,its not lady like." "Oh -acky mushrooms, i didnt mean to, sorry." Natla took great pleasure in agrivating her enimies. "I'm warning you" " I didnt mean to... oh **-tols" "ok" BANG

18-06-05, 19:04	#3
Hefin Historian Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Wales Posts: 490	yep - why? Anyway, just out of curiosity, does anyone if Lara does swear? Dont ask why! [ 18. June 2005, 20:06: Message edited by: Cubiculum Neohili ]