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Old 22-06-07, 23:48   #161
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That poem was simply mesmerizing!
Mine? Really? Or are you talking about someone else's?
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Old 23-06-07, 01:41   #162
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Mine? Really? Or are you talking about someone else's?
yours

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Old 23-06-07, 02:40   #163
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Old 23-06-07, 03:58   #164
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Ok, I'm going to try and think of something about redemption
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Old 23-06-07, 18:02   #165
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Redemption




Lara steped through the portal, her eyes locked on to Natlas.

"You evil nasty distugsting witch" with this lara pulled out her pistols and fired wildly at natla her hearts pain overtook her, she cryed with anger "my mother, you took her, you YOU" lara shouted.

"You destroyed the seventh age, I asked you to join me but you refused, you deserve to die, you deserve eternal pain !" natla immediatly returned laras bullets with fire bolts



Lara ran and leaped in the air , everything stoped for a single moment the world stood still. Thoughts ran through laras head her life ,her mother ,her father but most of all Redemtion ....




Tears streamed from her eyes, "this is for my ,MOTHER" she droped her pistols and drew excalibur "this time its true Natla this time I'll finish you like I finished your race". She fired it at natla but natla doged it and flew at sonic speed towards Lara ....



Laras rage errupted she screamed , her eyes blured with tears she left the floor with an almighty thrust and lifted the anceint sword , it lurched forward as Natla came closer ; the blade and ntlas chest collided the sword burst through it ...



"NOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Natla fell from the sky "LARA YOU HAVE FAILED YOUR MOTHER IS DEAD NOTHING YOU CAN DO WITH CHANGE THAT, KILLING ME HAS ONLY EASED YOU ; SOON YOULL SEE THAT" with this she slumped to the ground

Lara fell also "Natla killing you has accomplished more than that, killing you has been like nothing I have ever felt before"

Lara rose form the gravel and approached Natlas body, she then pulled out the sword and left the portal .......


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Old 23-06-07, 20:38   #166
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Small, quick - confusing to me because I haven't played Anniversary.. or TR1 for the record
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Old 23-06-07, 20:42   #167
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Small, quick - confusing to me because I haven't played Anniversary.. or TR1 for the record
Freakkkkkkkkkkkkkk!
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Old 23-06-07, 20:43   #168
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Freakkkkkkkkkkkkkk!
Do you want me to unleash my Evanescence-ness that I have bottled up inside of me since two weeks?!
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Old 23-06-07, 20:44   #169
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Small, quick - confusing to me because I haven't played Anniversary.. or TR1 for the record
whoops well pretend it never happend backs away slowly
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Old 23-06-07, 20:52   #170
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Nah - it's OK...

I pretty much spoil all the fun
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