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Old 17-06-19, 14:33   #566
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Originally Posted by Tonyrobinson View Post
I was thinking the formatting looked a bit odd but maybe she's writing an extended action sequence or something.
Still, you generally want descriptions to be as short as possible and simple to read. The picture looks to have quite big walls of text.

But again, she might write things unformatted and do the formatting later. Many writers do it so they can get ideas flowing without having to worry about "formalities".
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