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We all n ow the end od aod lara enter the some black room....
But.... When Lara enter the room ther was Kurtis on flor. Lara fast run to him . Lara: Oh Kurtis, what happend. Kurtis: Boaz, that blody think. I shod killd him I shod! Lara: Come down, just relax. So I find in this room over ther blod and your srkl. But I was wonder wers your body. Kurtis: Well, I was teak my streng and mejdit to this room, but I cant walk enymoor. Lara: Kurtis, oh...I....oh.... Kurtis: Do you Love me? Lara: Well, yes! Kurtis: Me too. Then Kutis star bleading too fast. Lara slowly put down her hed and slowly kissd him but it was too late Kurtis wer ovw reddy dead.
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Ha! Ha! Ha! *stands with Riv*. Not a Kurtis fan either!
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Again, it's a nice try
![]() ![]() But AGAIN, there's grammatical mistakes...I guess you can figure out where they are ![]()
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Oh, you now I am not wery good at englesh grammatich, so.... But I now to speak engles wery well!
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yes im having trouble with the grammer also
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Tweaked it a bit for you.
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nice try
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