Kurtis dead!!

_Tomb_Raider · 26-03-08, 16:51

We all n ow the end od aod lara enter the some black room....
But....

When Lara enter the room ther was Kurtis on flor.
Lara fast run to him .
Lara: Oh Kurtis, what happend.
Kurtis: Boaz, that blody think. I shod killd him I shod!
Lara: Come down, just relax. So I find in this room over ther blod and your srkl. But I was wonder wers your body.
Kurtis: Well, I was teak my streng and mejdit to this room, but I cant walk enymoor.
Lara: Kurtis, oh...I....oh....
Kurtis: Do you Love me?
Lara: Well, yes!
Kurtis: Me too.

Then Kutis star bleading too fast.
Lara slowly put down her hed and slowly kissd him but it was too late Kurtis wer ovw reddy dead.

Rivendell · 26-03-08, 16:53

Is it weird I find it funny?

Kamrusepas · 26-03-08, 16:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rivendell

Is it weird I find it funny?

Yes, you cruel man *slaps Riv*

Inkheart · 26-03-08, 16:56

Ha! Ha! Ha! *stands with Riv*. Not a Kurtis fan either!

rowanlim · 26-03-08, 16:57

Again, it's a nice try

But AGAIN, there's grammatical mistakes...I guess you can figure out where they are

_Tomb_Raider · 26-03-08, 17:18

Quote:

Originally Posted by rowanlim

Again, it's a nice try

But AGAIN, there's grammatical mistakes...I guess you can figure out where they are

Oh, you now I am not wery good at englesh grammatich, so.... But I now to speak engles wery well!

Last Angel · 26-03-08, 17:20

yes im having trouble with the grammer also

but the do you love me bit was funny

Rivendell · 26-03-08, 17:24

Tweaked it a bit for you.

Quote:

We all know the end of aod. Lara enters the black room....
But....

When Lara enters the room, there was Kurtis on the floor.
Lara runs fastly (quickly) towards him .
Lara: Oh Kurtis, what happened?
Kurtis: Boaz, that bloody thing. I should have killed her I should! (If that's what you were trying to say!)
Lara: Calm down, just relax. So I find in this room over there, with blood and your circle. But I was wondering where your body was.
Kurtis: Well, I was taking (?) my strength and made it to this room, but I cant walk anymore.
Lara: Kurtis, oh...I....oh....
Kurtis: Do you Love me?
Lara: Well, yes!
Kurtis: Me too.

Then Kurtis starts bleeding too fast.
Lara slowly put down her head and gently kissed him but it was too late - Kurtis was already dead.

Drone · 26-03-08, 17:25

nice try

but that part was funny I didn't know that Kurtis loves himself

Quote:

Kurtis: Do you Love me?
Lara: Well, yes!
Kurtis: Me too.

Bumio · 26-03-08, 20:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by _Tomb_Raider

I shod killd him I shod!

what does "shod" means

doesnt this word stand for "shoe"? - "i shoe killed him i shoe"

26-03-08, 16:51	#1
_Tomb_Raider Professor Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 2,821	Kurtis dead!! We all n ow the end od aod lara enter the some black room.... But.... When Lara enter the room ther was Kurtis on flor. Lara fast run to him . Lara: Oh Kurtis, what happend. Kurtis: Boaz, that blody think. I shod killd him I shod! Lara: Come down, just relax. So I find in this room over ther blod and your srkl. But I was wonder wers your body. Kurtis: Well, I was teak my streng and mejdit to this room, but I cant walk enymoor. Lara: Kurtis, oh...I....oh.... Kurtis: Do you Love me? Lara: Well, yes! Kurtis: Me too. Then Kutis star bleading too fast. Lara slowly put down her hed and slowly kissd him but it was too late Kurtis wer ovw reddy dead. __________________ Avatar from Inna Vjuzhanina AOD characters collection.

26-03-08, 16:56	#4
Inkheart Archaeologist Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Controversy Posts: 1,151	Ha! Ha! Ha! stands with Riv. Not a Kurtis fan either! __________________ I don't cause commotions, I am one

26-03-08, 16:57	#5
rowanlim Legend Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Malaysia Posts: 37,689	Again, it's a nice try But AGAIN, there's grammatical mistakes...I guess you can figure out where they are __________________ All that's beautiful drifts away, like the waters

26-03-08, 17:20	#7
Last Angel Archaeologist Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Underworld♥ Gender: Female Posts: 1,618	yes im having trouble with the grammer also but the do you love me bit was funny __________________ Shes Dangerous

26-03-08, 16:53	#2
Rivendell Legend Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Misty Mountains ♂ Posts: 39,133	Is it weird I find it funny?