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Old 26-03-08, 17:51   #1
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Default Kurtis dead!!

We all n ow the end od aod lara enter the some black room....
But....

When Lara enter the room ther was Kurtis on flor.
Lara fast run to him .
Lara: Oh Kurtis, what happend.
Kurtis: Boaz, that blody think. I shod killd him I shod!
Lara: Come down, just relax. So I find in this room over ther blod and your srkl. But I was wonder wers your body.
Kurtis: Well, I was teak my streng and mejdit to this room, but I cant walk enymoor.
Lara: Kurtis, oh...I....oh....
Kurtis: Do you Love me?
Lara: Well, yes!
Kurtis: Me too.

Then Kutis star bleading too fast.
Lara slowly put down her hed and slowly kissd him but it was too late Kurtis wer ovw reddy dead.
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Old 26-03-08, 17:53   #2
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Is it weird I find it funny?
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Old 26-03-08, 17:55   #3
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Is it weird I find it funny?
Yes, you cruel man *slaps Riv*
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Old 26-03-08, 17:56   #4
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Ha! Ha! Ha! *stands with Riv*. Not a Kurtis fan either!
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Old 26-03-08, 17:57   #5
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Again, it's a nice try

But AGAIN, there's grammatical mistakes...I guess you can figure out where they are
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Old 26-03-08, 18:18   #6
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Again, it's a nice try

But AGAIN, there's grammatical mistakes...I guess you can figure out where they are
Oh, you now I am not wery good at englesh grammatich, so.... But I now to speak engles wery well!
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Old 26-03-08, 18:20   #7
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yes im having trouble with the grammer also but the do you love me bit was funny
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Old 26-03-08, 18:24   #8
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Tweaked it a bit for you.

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We all know the end of aod. Lara enters the black room....
But....

When Lara enters the room, there was Kurtis on the floor.
Lara runs fastly (quickly) towards him .
Lara: Oh Kurtis, what happened?
Kurtis: Boaz, that bloody thing. I should have killed her I should! (If that's what you were trying to say!)
Lara: Calm down, just relax. So I find in this room over there, with blood and your circle. But I was wondering where your body was.
Kurtis: Well, I was taking (?) my strength and made it to this room, but I cant walk anymore.
Lara: Kurtis, oh...I....oh....
Kurtis: Do you Love me?
Lara: Well, yes!
Kurtis: Me too.

Then Kurtis starts bleeding too fast.
Lara slowly put down her head and gently kissed him but it was too late - Kurtis was already dead.
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Old 26-03-08, 18:25   #9
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nice try but that part was funny I didn't know that Kurtis loves himself

Quote:
Kurtis: Do you Love me?
Lara: Well, yes!
Kurtis: Me too.
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Old 26-03-08, 21:28   #10
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I shod killd him I shod!
what does "shod" means
doesnt this word stand for "shoe"? - "i shoe killed him i shoe"

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